Kia Ora Tyson,
I really like your Weather Description writing it sounds just like the day. You are very lucky to have a nana to make you pumpkin soup and have the house nice and warm with the fire going. I also like how you described the wind as swirling.
The background colour makes your story stand out. Where did the tree fall down across the road?
Keep up the great posts. I am looking forward to reading all about your great work.
Whaea Donna
Kia ora Tyson, I love your background because it was blue and I love teal blue. I liked how you said “is there going to be a tornado??” Was there a tornado??
Kia Ora Tyson,
I really like your Weather Description writing it sounds just like the day. You are very lucky to have a nana to make you pumpkin soup and have the house nice and warm with the fire going. I also like how you described the wind as swirling.
The background colour makes your story stand out. Where did the tree fall down across the road?
Keep up the great posts. I am looking forward to reading all about your great work.
Whaea Donna
Kia ora Tyson, I love your background because it was blue and I love teal blue. I liked how you said “is there going to be a tornado??” Was there a tornado??